An Inconvenience

posted 19th Nov 2012, 12:12 AM

An Inconvenience
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19th Nov 2012, 12:12 AM

SnaleKing

Alright, if it isn't clear, Zyxus is putting on the Acinaci scabbards and belt in the third panel.
Those backgrounds count as backgrounds, they are in a grey room.

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21st Nov 2012, 2:44 AM

Abstractworld15

*gasp* My comment is late! O.O Anyway, forever promising! I look forward to the next page... Maybe some Acinaci action...? ^_^

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21st Nov 2012, 2:28 PM

Abstractworld15

Erg, just noticed this. If you wanted to make the third panel a bit more dramatic and a bit more obvious that he is clipping in his Acinaci you could have zoomed in to just the hands clipping them on and have the text bubble pointing to outside of the panel.... A bit more dramatic and a bit more obvious ;)

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16th Sep 2013, 11:40 AM

CrazySOB42

Really loving the story so far. An erased mind is clean slate. Those who are wicked have the choice of remaining humane, or becoming a monster, yet again.

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