Her Name

posted 2nd Dec 2012, 10:41 PM

Her Name
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2nd Dec 2012, 10:41 PM

SnaleKing

Trysha in panel 3 took some fiddling and thinking to get right, but I think she looks pretty good.
(I'm still figuring out little quirks of anatomy that make them look more believable, so the character design might change oh-so-slightly in some of the following pages)

Background is grey again, but the shadows in 3+4 give it some definition.

The dialogue in panel 4 is a little confusing, but the evil guy talks, then Zyxus, then the evil guy again.

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5th Dec 2012, 11:15 PM

Abstractworld15

Trysha's face in panel three is priceless! I love what you have done with her anatomy. I love that the evil guy is still functioning after he got his arm cut off... I know I wouldn't be! I hope that Zyxus is cutting his head in half in that last panel though O.O He's annoying as all get out...^_^

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16th Sep 2013, 11:55 AM

CrazySOB42

The anatomy looks perfectly fine so far. Or at least I don't see any implications. But then again, I'm a just a mere hobbyist writer.

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