Head Injury?

posted 23rd Dec 2012, 10:20 AM

Head Injury?
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23rd Dec 2012, 10:20 AM

SnaleKing

I know the robe probably wouldn't fit Trysha that well, but I wanted to see how she'd look in it, so there.

And this comic brings the total number of species seen to two! *rubs hands together evilly* the first of many! (by which I mean 6)

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30th Dec 2012, 8:33 PM

abstractworld

YAY! Another page :D I love this comic so much! So happy to see that bad guy go! :D

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18th Jan 2013, 4:15 PM

EdInFresno

Since this is posted in a critique page I'll critique it.

First, line style and layout are good. The characters are original and the story flows well, is clear and easy to follow. Also, you present it in such a way that I want to know what happens next.


Finally, I'm really glad to see that you didn't fall into the "trap" of trying to develop yet another anime style since that's just been done to death and back but have chosen to develop your own style. What I see of that is the beginnings of what I believe will become a truly original and unique style once it becomes fully developed. I give this five of five.

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